Here's
my first draft of the ending of Cassandra:
A harsh noise overhead rouses us all. A helicopter lifts rapidly into the sky. The single figure leaning out the door to look at us is not outfitted like a soldier. It's a man, tall, dark haired, in a dark suit. He fades to invisibility. The helicopter becomes a point against the unbroken blue.
The silence fills with the groans and gasps of other men. I look around. The other two helicopters must have crashed together. They lay in a heap, engulfed in flames.
The men who rode the helicopters are scattered over the lawn. Their uniforms have been rent by the explosion. Some try to move. Others lie still.
One of the soldiers stands. The blast has shredded his uniform. The few rags left hanging on him cover nothing. Orion and Chiron see him and attack. Their leaping rush throws him to the ground. One of the dogs takes his arm, the other takes his neck.
I'm on my feet, running to him. I take Orion by the collar, scolding and commanding until he releases the man's neck. Chiron obeys my command and sits by his brother. Blood runs over the soldier's chest. The dogs didn't bite him. Their grip left no marks. He's wounded some other way.
That's pretty rough-drafty, but it illustrates what I mean about endings. I've been brooding over a story line for Paul's story. This morning after I got to the end of Cassandra, I finally began to develop a concept of how Paul's story will start and where it might head. Endings are beginnings for writers as well as readers.
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