Every reader is like a one-night fling. They're not going to
stick around unless they feel as if they're getting somewhere. They want it
fast, and they want it now. In writing erotic fiction, I try to start in the
middle of a sex encounter and then move ahead as quickly as I can. The
get-acquainted chatter is minimal. This doesn't mean that you have to abandon
all attempts to tell a story. You can have a lot going on, as long as you don't
take too long between fucks to explain it.
The stories I've published through eXtasy Books start like
this: Mandi—in the middle of a blow job. Clytie—two people in bed. Minotaur—a
wild bachelorette party. The Huntress—bringing
a man under control. Midas—a suggestively undone button. Only
The Huntress isn't right in the
middle of sex in the opening lines, and it starts with the words, The twang of the
bowstring rocks my cunt.
Make it a quickie. The reader wants to be done with you, and on
to the next encounter.
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