THE DIARY OF AN EROTIC WRITER

Night Wild Cover

Here's the cover to my erotic romance Night Wild, scheduled for release December 1 by eXtasy Books:
When a new story is submitted to eXtasy, the editors ask the writer to suggest ideas for the cover, including descriptions of the hero and heroine, a short summary of the story, key symbols or ideas, and a general idea for the cover. This is all the designer has to go on.

Here is what I suggested to cover designer Carmen Waters:

Description of Heroine:

Laurie Deloit is DARK HAIRED, tall, and hot. As Raven, a star whore, her FACE IS MASKED IN PAINTED-ON DARK SWIRLS LIKE FEATHERS, and her dress is black, filmy, very low cut, very low backed, very high slit. 


Short Summary of Story:

Seattle lawyer Laurie Deloit has a chance to live out her fantasy—sex with strangers—when she's offered night work at Seattle Young, an exclusive brothel. She's lived on her fantasy following her abandonment by the man to whom she gave all her love. She throws herself into wild sex in the glass rooms--whorehouse bedrooms with transparent walls.

Key symbols or objects:        

Laurie as she is made up for a night as Raven, star of the brothel—black hair, face painted in  feather-like black swirls, wearing a gauzy low-cut, low-backed, high slit black gown. (I don't know how hard it might be to do the feather-painted face, but it's a really big part of the story.)

Author Ideas - What you would like to see on the cover:

The two sides of Laurie Deliot:  Laurie as a lawyer in the dark business suit, and Laurie as Raven the lady of wild nights with her black-feather-painted face and slinky black gown. The distinctive Seattle skyline with the Space Needle would make a great background.


I put the key physical descriptions in all caps to be sure Carmen didn't overlook them. If my raven haired-beauty turned into a blonde on the cover, it would be my fault for not having made sure that the cover designer was aware of the right coloring.
Carmen used many of my suggestions.  The black hair, black dress, the heavy face makeup, a bit of the Seattle skyline, and even a suggestion of glass walls are all there. In working with cover designers, I bear in mind that the designer has other covers to design and can't spend a month working on mine. I also try to remember that writers express things in words, while designers think in terms of colors and figures.

As always, Carmen's cover is a lot better than the suggestion I had in my mind's eye.  She captures my character's mood of reckless abandon almost uncannily.

I also love the wild long eyelashes. Although the final manuscript has been submitted, I'm going to add those to my character's night wild makeup.

 

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